The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Our exposure to vast amount of information has dramatically increased with the advent of internet. i strongly believe that this is best thing that happened to humankind. this essay will first discuss how internet has changed traditional way of learning, and then discuss it is helping us to be aware and informed about the thing which are of our interest.
Internet has brought revolution in education.it has opened ingenious ways of getting knowledge. people,who want to get education from institutes which are out of their reach, can learn from them while setting at home, in front of their computer. for example,thanks to MOOC,"Massive open online course",million of people are enrolled in various online courses of their interest.moreover internet is playing a pivotal role as catalyst in many scientific breakthrough as research papers and journals are uploaded and constantly updated on website for public viewing.
Secondly,internet has connected our world in a way that it became global village. it has been playing a major role in bridging the distance between people who belong to different countries. for instance,social media sites such as Facebook give us facility of being connected to our friends,relatives who live in areas which are far away from us.we remains in contact with each other with seeing each other. similarly people can watch big sports events where they cannot go physically just because of they are happening in other countries.such as ,it is reported that 10 million people, belonging to different nations, watched football world cup online.
in conclusion,as human being is constantly leveraging internet's coffers of information,they will continue to evolve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48484848485 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35806937625 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2791441186 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126026715339 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500352093217 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299732307275 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075944334851 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321921005858 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.