Is it better to shop online or in-store?
Nowadays, although there are many online services such as grab food,....which are popular with people, I side with the view that it is better to shop in-store.There are various reasons to shop in-store, especially three main ones. First of all, when shopping in-store, we can make a choice many qualitative products. This might be explained by the fact that we recognize real or fake products by seeing or touching them directly.For this reason, we don't exchange them that takes us much time.Secondly, we can select products which come up to our demands. For example, on trying clothes in store, we will be aware of stylish clothes which are suitable for our body , skin or hair.On the other hand, product' online photos are unbelievable and very virtual.Therefore, we have difficulty in selecting products , on shopping online. Finally, if we choose suitable store,their price will be cheap. This is because delivery fee is relatively expensive. Moreover, shopping online takes us much time to order and ship them. In conclusion, should you be a careful person, you shop in-store because you could buy a variety of cheap and good products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08556149733 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95272228783 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673796791444 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.4510768137 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.875 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.375 7.06120827912 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325653520926 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141696811511 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12020749267 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325653520926 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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