It is clear that the invention of the internet has led to a dramatic change in the way information is distributed and accessed. This essay will explore two of the main problems that have resulted from these changes and propose measures that might address them.
One of the main concerns in sharing the information is that private data may now be more vulnerable to thefts. This is because information is increasingly stored electronically rather than physically, which can be stolen by any hacker who infiltrates a website. Consequently, people feel less secure while sharing their moments over social media websities like Facebook and Instagram. To tackle this problem, companies which handle this secured information should install the strictest anti-hacking security software. By doing this, information shared over the internet can be protected by cyber criminals.
Turning to consumption, the most pressing problem is much of what we read online is not true. Whereas in the past we mostly read news articles in established newspapers, nowadays, anyone can publish information on a blog or forum without verifying them. In another way, if those who read such falsehoods accept them as truths, they might spread them further on social media, in turn misinforming public. This problem can be mitigated by requiring social media websites to hire fact-checkers whose job is to detect the validity of news articles before it is shared online.
In conclusion, the two of the main internet-related concerns that the internet age has created are the vulnerability of data and the proliferation of fake news. However, these issues should be minimized by law-enforced installation of cutting-edge security software and recruitment of social media websities fact-checkers.
It is clear that the invention of the internet has led to a dramatic change in the way information is distributed and accessed. This essay will explore two of the main problems that have resulted from these changes and propose measures that might address them.
One of the main concerns in sharing the information is that private data may now be more vulnerable to thefts. This is because information is increasingly stored electronically rather than physically, which can be stolen by any hacker who infiltrates a website. Consequently, people feel less secure while sharing their moments over social media websities like Facebook and Instagram. To tackle this problem, companies which handle this secured information should install the strictest anti-hacking security software. By doing this, information shared over the internet can be protected by cyber criminals.
Turning to consumption, the most pressing problem is much of what we read online is not true. Whereas in the past we mostly read news articles in established newspapers, nowadays, anyone can publish information on a blog or forum without verifying them. In another way, if those who read such falsehoods accept them as truths, they might spread them further on social media, in turn misinforming public. This problem can be mitigated by requiring social media websites to hire fact-checkers whose job is to detect the validity of news articles before it is shared online.
In conclusion, the two of the main internet-related concerns that the internet age has created are the vulnerability of data and the proliferation of fake news. However, these issues should be minimized by law-enforced installation of cutting-edge security software and recruitment of social media websities fact-checkers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, whereas, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45289855072 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09365767521 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0677189338 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35242402546 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135218448622 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200836247481 0.0667982634062 301% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305887896198 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.381758676254 0.056905535591 671% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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