'Tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to
understand each other.’
To what extent do you agree with this idea?
In recent times, travelling has become a hugely popular activity. However, in my opinion, although tourism industry play a vital role in promoting trust and understanding between different nations, this is rare as travelers can create tension as well.
To begin with, it is important to acknowledge that tourism can help to broaden people's horizons. For instance, exploring unfamiliar regions give people a chance to experience new cultures and meet people from different backgrounds. As a result, people can enjoy a deeper appreciation for the world. Another significant cause to consider is tolerance, which develop among local populations. Travelers may be not aware of overseas laws and implications of their actions, but local societies show tolerant of their misunderstanding and allow them to learn about cultures and traditions of the host country. By doing so, local people not only help to boost their economy but also embrace cultural diversity.
That said, there are often some concerns raise when tourists trip abroad, not least among them the potential negatives of contact between cultures. This is because tourists usually cause pollution and damage the ecology of the country. This can be been seen in litter thrown in Paris and in damaging ecology by desert safari in Africa. Consequently, this creates tension between different countries which foster resentment and distrust, rather than good understanding between nationalities. Moreover, this is always said that tourism allows the flow of wealth from the developed countries to poor nations, but this wealth usually grabbed by private companies and officials, and tends not to trickle down to the local populations.
In conclusion, while tourism brings the number of benefits in terms of experiencing new cultures and developing tolerance, it is important to consider that this also harm environment of the host country, and rare benefits of the boosted economy to the local people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he boosted economy to the local people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49836065574 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87054001888 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4141859856 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.785714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174494029146 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579738066582 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434831380186 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900629679388 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040826311388 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.