It is expected that in the future old people are going to outnumber young people in many countries. Do you feel this is a positive or negative development?
The population of the senior citizens of many societies has been on the increase in recent years. People have different views on the issue of whether this is a positive trend or not. I believe that although there are some advantages of the increasing number of elderly people in various nations, the disadvantages by far outweigh the advantages. It will be shown by analyzing the lack of workforce and the expenditures spend on health scheme.
One of the most significant negative effects of the large number of elderly people in each society is the huge amount of money that should be spent on health care system. This increasing number of old people need a decent public health system which includes modern, equipped hospitals and appliances that should be required from taxpayers and would put pressure on the economy. A salient example of this is the Japan in which the number of senior citizens is almost twice as the number of youngsters and government has to spend 60% of the taxes on health scheme.
On the other hand, the scarcity in the number of young and effective workforce would have some detrimental effects on the economy and progressions in various fields such as science, technology and the like. Young people are more innovative, ambitious and energetic, so they are interested in making improvements in their job by enhancing the working environment and thinking up new strategies and ideas; however, the elderly people are not enthusiastic enough to pursue the latest technology and they are out of touch with the modern life style. To support my claim, I can refer to an article having been published in Times magazine, indicates that the Australian governments have to accept more immigrants in order to boost the number of birth in their country and to cover the scarcity of young workforce in the market.
In conclusion, not only the economy of the society but also the public issues such as health would be influenced by increasing number of elderly in different nations. Some steps should be taken by government authorities to tackle this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9770773639 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71608452196 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512893982808 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8950298475 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.75 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146547942803 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569226632577 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491642020485 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877448615779 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423025964745 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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