It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to individual development and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions?
it is a common belief that education plays an important role in shaping a person as an individual, as well as an upstanding member of the community. this essay will first discuss the necessary components that should be added into the curriculum for preparing children as an individual, yet responsible citizen, followed by the reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, several tools could be made a compulsory part of education to prepare youngsters for the future role of a society. On the first hand, curriculum needs to be revised by adding a sustained process of teaching, which consist of courses, viz. the moral values and character building, thus giving them education about values of caring about other people, honesty, responsibility, hard work, forgiveness and other important traits that make for an upstanding citizen . For instance, making students learn and adopt, moral and ethical values by presenting them examples of societal ethical norms and values and making them practice those values. Consequently, it will raise them as an ethical and responsible individuals to the society.
However, on the other hand, to make the young minds independent and successful individuals, academics are required to add courses that are professional, practical oriented, highly employable and represents flexible pathway into such industries which are only set to grow and expand. To illustrate, fields such as science, medicine, law, architecture, accounting, and engineering. In this way, the pupils in the foreseeable future could be able to land a well-paid job to earn livelihood and could manage their families efficiently.
To conclude, to see children as upstanding individuals of the community it is required to impart both professional along with character-building components in the academic system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, so, thus, well, for instance, of course, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51971326165 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14824011415 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2124684509 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133513757344 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481024025996 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348378021372 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729059848555 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307506819911 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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