It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The true off-spring of modern technological development is Internet. It is a significant advancement when compared to available mediums in the bygone era. However, it is not foolproof, it does come with drawback on data integrity, that is accessible just one-click away.
World wide web has certainly brought people from all corners of world together. It has opened new doors that were never fathomable in the era before. Programs like Instant messaging, VoIP have absolutely changed the mode of communication and the whole perspective of how to communicate. This has far-reaching effect on people than it was prior as it is readily available to access and is significantly cheaper.. For example, programs like Skype, have paved new path for communication in this digital age, which ofcourse is available to everyone and it doesn’t cost substantially.
One primary drawback of Internet is lack of integrity on the data that is readily available. People, now a days use Internet to discover information various subjects they like. But the data gathered is relatively ambiguous. The sole purpose of Internet is connectivity rather than verifying the data integrity itself. A high amount of discretion is needed when analysing such a data, which is relatively becoming scarce. There are other option such as library. Libraries are always stacked with books and records that are authentic. One such example is Google search. It just gathers and yields all the data that is available to a user but never checks for authenticity.
In this modern day and age, Internet is here to stay, be it a good or bad. It does have a substantial benefit in terms of communication, which is the primary cause of bringing world together. With some discretion, the advantages of Internet are vastly expanded and humans can be benefitted with such a technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 409, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...e to access and is significantly cheaper.. For example, programs like Skype, have ...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...data that is readily available. People, now a days use Internet to discover information va...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03391752616 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.126235826 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.35 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0738533051025 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.020305794863 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244007270342 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452071295481 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246901422665 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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