It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports of music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Talent is a skill that makes a person exceptionally different from others. It is often considered that talent is a god gift and children are born with the talent to become a singer or a sports person. However some people believe that children can become a celebrity by learning skills. In this essay I will discuss both these views and present my opinion about the same.
To begin with, It is very common to see these days that kids of the sports-player always follows sports as profession and same is the case of musicians. It is because it is in their genes. They have love and passion for that particular field by birth so they just need to polish their skills as compared to other children.
On the other side, it is not always required to be talented by birth, you can learn any new skill by training and self practice. In this modern world, we have so many technologies, tools and applications that makes it possible to learn any skill weather sports or music. Also there are large number of trainers and technicians available who can teach you the basics as well as tips and tricks of sports or music. So, it is hardly required to be god gifted with a talent.
In my opinion, children can expertise any extra-curricular activity with the help of experts and own practice. Although having a celebrity parent is an additional benefits because you have guide at your home but it is not always seen that children adapt their parent's fields of work. Also it is all about interest, person can learn any thing and at any age very easily if he has interest otherwise any of the multi-talented experts or technology is not going to work. So, I believe that talent can be learned it is not necessary to born with the one. For example a very famous singer Sonu Nigam was an entrepreneur and none of his ancestor ever tried singing but through is immense practices and enthusiasm for music, he is India's most popular Rap singer.
In conclusion, every person has some or the other talent. Talent is necessary to keep yourself discrete from group of people. Talent could be by birth or learned at the growing age. In my opinion it is not mandatory to be born with talent , we can gain talent through lessons and our hard work and even though you have some sorts of by birth talent you have to practice alot to earn a good name.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5486935867 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50092972537 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50593824228 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2824531395 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.05 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249890381167 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792017770958 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482677663334 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146416481961 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394663975937 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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