Nowadays for many people the internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion about this trend?
Books have been our best friend's since history. They not only provide information or help us kill time but also provide us company as a friend. However, in this modern world, books have been replaced by e-books. This essay will discuss the future perspective of this trend and my opinion about the same.
To begin with the futuristic view of ebooks replacing the paper books. This trend would have detrimental impact on our physical and psychological health. For example, reading ebooks will not only badly affect our eye-sight due to increased screen time but will also affect our concentration and sleeping pattern.Another major impact of this trend would be unemployment. For example, the authors may publish there content or stories online but the booksellers, bookbinders and may others who are associated with the printing and selling of books would loose their job.
In my opinion, this trend would have more negative affect on the society than positive. The prime negative reason is that reading ebooks would increase the usage of electricity and interenet, which is not appropriate for the environment. Moreover, ebooks cannot be read by those who are not computer savvy or who knows only native language as paper books are published in muliple languages. thus this trend would not be very beneficial as this will negatively impact the number of readers.
To conclude, books are the source of entertainment and education. However, these days, paper books have been replaced by ebooks. If this trend continues, it would have negative impact on our health such as affecting our vision though increased screen-time and also impact society as many people would be jobless . In my opinion, this trend should not be promoted as it will effect the large number of book lovers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12671232877 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63793162714 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7850863935 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182013481357 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721880410132 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664873876118 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126574441143 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217905525688 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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