Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people’s health. More and more people are eating it.
Why are more people eating fast food?
What can be done about this problem?
These days we all love to eat fast food irrespective of its bad effects on our health. Even though most of the doctors around the globe also believe that fast food is not good for our health. In this essay, I will discuss the major reason such as busy lifestyle and lack of cooking skills that forces us to eat junk food and I will also offer some suggestions including health awareness programs and cookery classes to tackle this problem.
To start with the reasons, There are several reasons for expanded consumption of fast food these days. One of the major reason is busy lifestyle that is we are so busy with our work and businesses that we hardly have time to cook nutritious food. Most of us work around 50 hours a week and there are several personal chores as well so in such cases, ready to eat food are considered better than freshly cooked food. Lack of cooking skills is another major reason behind the junk food consumption. It is very common to see youngsters living away from family , they do not know how to cook a meal. Consequently, they prefer frozen meals and junk food over cooking themselves. In a survey conducted by Harvard university in 2010, It was found that 60% of youngsters live independently due to their work or studies ans shockingly large percentage of these people are dependent on fast-food for their living.
There are various ways by which we can mitigate this problem. One of the primary solution is to start health awareness program that discuss the hazardous side-effects of fast food to our lives along with that the benefits of healthy diet should be discussed. Another easy solution could be starting a cookery classes or publishing cookery articles that explains how to prepare healthy food in less time thus it will encourage people to opt for nutritious food over fast food.
To conclude, Undoubtedly, availability of ready to eat food had made our lives easier but its benefits could not overrule its ill-effects to our body. Busy lifestyle and poor cooking skills are the major reasons behind the choice of junk food but health awareness program and cookery classes to improve cooking skills could be a beneficial solution to this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, thus, well, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8073878628 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50774976109 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490765171504 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7023338376 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.466666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281129439986 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106654583996 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647850395165 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192421450802 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610367419165 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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