Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places.
In this modern world, we could make a tour to any part of the globe without having second thought, all it requires is an enthusiasm and money. However, it is very common to see that tourist cover the places of great adventure. however, there are many benefits and drawbacks of undertaking such tours. This essay will examine various advantages and disadvantages of exploring traveler sites with difficult conditions.
To begin with the benefits, the primary advantage of touring at places with difficult conditions is the monetary. These days most of the tours are conducted for making a videos or publish an article or book on that tourist place thus earning a life-time income from one visit. To a matter of fact, many people have made this hobby as a profession to earn income as well. Moreover, they sell the photographs of the beautiful places at great prices and even put them on exhibitions. Another beautiful benefit of touring at unique places is to have a unique experience that could not be gained anywhere else. For example, tracking mount washington in a fall season, will give a marvellous feeling.
however, visiting places where conditions are tough is not always fruitful. These vacational tours demand a hefty amount of expenses. one such tour may require good safety gears, costumes and cameras ,navigation and various other modern devices. Not only this, sometimes these tours are very risky and may take the lives of tourist. For example, the group of eight foreign tourist got submerged into snow, when they tried to track Nanda Mountain during december month, that was really heart breaking news.
To conclude, touring is not only a hobby these days, it has become a profession. Touring to dangerous sites is beneficial in terms of unique experience , monetary rewards and world-wide fame but they are extremely expensive and risky as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, thus, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.071197411 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59714283098 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2072239608 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1764705882 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179092841668 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566055453225 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548470153623 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997329078294 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589027642311 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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