Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places.
In this dynamic competitive world today, majority of people find interest in tourism, especially the hardest places where survival is flinty. Although,tourists go there to overcome their fears, whereas sometimes they put themselves in jeopardise. This essay will discuss some of the reasons why people love to travel in unsociable areas and some of the challenges associated with it.
The first and the foremost advantage of travelling in scorching and freezing areas is to overcome their fears. Through this situated man boost their self confidence which helps in their future to deal with such disasters. For instance, Man vs. Wild is a survival series on discovery channel, hosted by bear grill who helped individuals to learn how to live in deleterious environment like amazon's forest and southern desert. This help people to become more stable. Additionally, individual of modern societies want to enlightened theirselves by exploring the nature. It will help them to know more about the temperatures and how the natives survive there. For instance, a recent survey by 'Hindustan Times' reveals that a group of young boy went to Arab Emirates and made a project of the temperatures and about the residents who survive in a sharp high temperatures. So, it is helpful for our prosperity to enhance their knowledge.
On the flip side of the argument, stay in exceeded high or low temperature is harmful for human body. Despite having knowledge about the area, travellers put themselves in detrimental conditions. To illustrate,a recent news posted on social media that two boys died in Antarkika during rock climbing because of less amount of oxygen. So these places are not in favour of human nature. Furthermore, these kind of less crowded area does not have sufficient means for survival like hospitality, educational, transportation and so forth. To illustrate, residents of Thar desert is still facing these cumbersomes related to this issue. Therfore, it is ungrateful for travellers who travel such areas like that.
All the things considered, several aspects who influence the populations towards such areas which are sometimes not in favour of making. So, safety and awareness are the main two sources which are imperative for tourists who wants to travel unique places.
Comments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, still, whereas, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27123287671 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9106620316 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597260273973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9042454262 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.619047619 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.380952381 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160016627221 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445173715919 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371199482774 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975951379559 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313698877914 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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