Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, increasing number of visitors are interested in engage in extreme sports such as hiking, rock climbing and bungee jumping especially in areas with extreme weather conditions. This essay will explore two major benefits as thrilling experience and refreshing minds whereas health risk for their own life and risk bring them for relevant authorities as major drawbacks.
First of all, primary advantage of these tours would be exciting experience they could gain when doing hiking in difficult areas. Those areas, for instance, deserts as well as glaziers are not commonly visiting places and succeeding those journies would give them more pleasure. For example, once an individual reach to a peak of Himalaya could be a headline in a newspaper as it is a difficult task to accomplish. In addition,those kinds extreme sports is more likely to refresh their minds who engage with stressful work-life. There is no doubt that these tours will help to forget all their worries and refresh their minds once they are back to work.
On the other hand, these events could be a risk for both participants as well as for relevant organizing parties or governments. Because, if one injured or died while persuading their hikes, governments or insurance companies have to compensate for those families. At the same time, tourists are at great risk as these kind of highly physically demanding events can be hazardous to their bodies, which might end up with sudden strokes even. Some of unfortunate incidences which are being published on mass media is a good evident for this.
Overall, visiting of some adverse sites are advantageous in the sense of pleasure and relax, while, it is disadvantageous for visitors and relevant countries regarding health risks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , those
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...s could be a risk for both participants as well as for relevant organizing parties or gove...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ame time, tourists are at great risk as these kind of highly physically demanding events c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19298245614 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76095094265 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2416892277 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9166666667 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16510343258 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053970243586 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478925546691 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879418131573 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300616919321 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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