It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports of music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Talent is the skill that makes a person exceptionally different from others. It is often considered that talent is a god’s gift and children are born with the talent to become a famous singer or a sports person. However, some people believe that children can become a celebrity by learning skills. In this essay I will discuss both these views and present my own opinion about the same.
To begin with, it is very common to see these days that some kids are brilliant in studies and some are good in sports so yes all children have their set of talents which they own by birth. They do not require extra efforts to specialize in their best-loved activity like music, acting, sports. For example, a 4 years old Indian singer Aftab singh is a born gem, he did not took any musical classes but his voice is as sweet as cuckoo’s voice.
On the other side, it is not always required to be talented by birth, you can learn any new skill by training and practices. In this modern world, we have so many technologies, tools and applications that makes it possible to learn any skill of our interest such as sports or music. Also there are large number of trainers and technicians available who can teach you the basics as well as tips and tricks of sports or music. So, it is hardly required to be god gifted with a talent.
In my opinion, children can expertise any extra-curricular activity with the help of experts and own practice. Also, it is all about interest, person can learn anything and at any age very easily if he has interest otherwise any of the multi-talented experts or technology is not going to help. So, I believe that talent can be learned it is not necessary to born with the one. For example, a very famous singer Sonu nigam was an enterprenuer and none of his ancestor ever tried singing but through is immense practices and enthusiasm for music, he is India's most popular Rap singer.
In conclusion, Talent is necessary to keep your self discrete from group of people. One can inherit talent by birth or by learning. In my opinion it is not mandatory to be born with talent , we can gain talent through lessons and our hardwork and experiences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60256410256 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58510723504 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535897435897 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.675648627 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269472248092 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856220518377 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477520172934 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151204079673 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499486617021 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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