It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that certain people are naturally endowed with special abilities that enable to excel in sports, music or arts, while others are of the opinion that these skills can be learnt as a child can be trained to become a great musician or an excellent athlete. In my opinion, in spite of a child's innate abilities, it is important for the talents to be refined through training.
There are a lot of people who have recorded huge success in music, sports or arts as a result of exceptional inherent skills . Majority of these people are believed to have inherited these skills from their parents. The Jackson family is a typical example of a family that is famous for singing. It is believed that these abilities are found in their genes, passed down to the next generation, and cannot be taught no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.
Nevertheless, these abilities can be also be taught and learned as opined by other people. This evident in the proliferation of sports academies and music schools in the world, and great number of people enrolling in these schools to learn these abilities. For example, there are a good number of musicians and athletes who have succeeded in sports and music without exhibiting these skills at a tender age, but learnt them in schools that are specifically established for these purposes. In my opinion, good training should complement natural talents to bring out the best in a child.
In conclusion, although there are some people that possess innate abilities that enable them to excel in music, sports or arts , it is entirely necessary to undergo training to get the talents refined.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89084507042 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61195364125 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503521126761 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4337003721 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.272727273 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387923578479 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137633390221 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623156146397 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230656369492 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751149839197 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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