Present a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones. Suggest that government and individuals can tackle these problems. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Overpopulation has been the major problem facing most cities of the world. In the recent times, drastic rapid growth in population has led to meteoric rise in crime rate and influx of young people from rural areas is believed to be the main factor responsible for this unfortunate trend. Thus, this essay will critically examine the negative effect of migration of young people to cities and likely measures to be taken by government and individuals to solve this problem.
A growing number of research suggest that increase in crime rate in most cities is caused by the uncontrolled influx of young graduates to cities after university education to search for job opportunities. For instance, in the last decade , the population of most cities has doubled due to high rate at which youths from rural areas to urban areas to search greener pastures. It is believed that larger proportion of these young graduates resort to crimes for survival as result of failure to secure jobs in the cities.
The government and individuals are saddle with the responsibilities to solve this problem confronting the cities. The government is expected to provide enabling environment the growth of business in the rural areas by providing infrastructure facilities such as constant electricity supply , good road network and health care. Young graduates in the rural areas are also to scan their environment and identify and exploit the opportunities there. They should acquire skills that will enable to self- independent instead of searching for non- existent white collar jobs in the cities.
In conclusion, high rate at which young people migrate from rural areas to urban areas has led to increase in crime rate in the cities . However, individual and government are responsible to provide lasting lasting solution to this unfortunate development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25423728814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8678379299 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505084745763 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9343005843 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12385242212 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537572603327 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311606564875 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083335845516 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144892642043 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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