In today’s world, with the advent of technology, the acceptance of online shopping is rapidly increasing day-by-day. As every coin has two sides, even this development has its own merits and demerits. In this essay, I will discuss why buying products via the internet has gained popularity and its pros and cons of development in modern society.
To commence with, the three main reasons for the vogue of e-commerce among the general public. The first and foremost is that people want to stay at home, and they can order anything with the help of the internet because online shopping can be done anywhere at any time around the world. Secondly, e-commerce gives a wide range of options to explore the products of our interest whereas commercial market shops have limited options available. Thirdly, some of the e-commerce websites offer cash delivery options. Consequently, consumers are not worried about sharing the details of credit cards online. Finally, the reduction of traffic congestion on roads and overcrowding in shopping malls. Therefore, in my view, shopping online is a spectacular development that has provided an enormous amount of benefits to consumers.
As every sword has two edges, we cannot deny the problems of online shopping. Chiefly, sometimes the quality of a product as mentioned online was not fulfill by some of the manufacturers as they only want to make money instead of selling good quality items online. However, this problem has been solved by e-commerce companies by providing feedback options and returning policy options on each product that is listed on their websites. Moreover, people have become shopping maniacs due to the large number of options available on the internet which have been a drawback for them to spend long hours on the internet.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, the rising demand for shopping on the internet is a good development for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, whereas, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03870967742 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59403782896 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 310.0 20.2975951904 1527% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1562.0 106.682146367 1464% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 310.0 20.7667163134 1493% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 132.0 7.06120827912 1869% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225514661512 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225514661512 0.084324248473 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158955092011 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762439165214 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 157.3 13.0946893788 1201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -243.17 50.2224549098 -484% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 124.2 11.3001002004 1099% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.93 8.58950901804 267% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 126.0 10.1190380762 1245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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