It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages.
Transformation in every aspect is much-needed in current world. you can not remain same as years passing. Many people advocate that changing is good rather than living same lifestyle for long time, While there is clearly a drawback to this, I personally believe that benefits are more significant.
The disadvantage of change is people can not stay in their comfort zones. They may lose their perspectives while varying. The reason for this is they may get habituated for living same with time. Therefore, it is not easy to adapt such alterations.for example, elder people can not easily accept new generation's living style.
On other hand, one of the major advantage of change is it make a person alive. When people are changing themselves they come to know about various new things that they never experienced before. That all things makes them feel as new life everyday. For instance, when old people are playing video games with their grand children's they reliving their childhood again.
In addition to that, a person who adopt modifications they becomes more knowledgeable and start thinking out of the box. the reason behind this is they will realize about many things and aspects they do not know earlier. They will start feeling good after seeing change in themselves. For example, today elders wants to welcome young generation's thoughts. By considering good aspects of living life they are changing themselves for better future.
In conclusion, the benefits of changing is more than drawbacks. people can get experience about more new things while keep updated with time. only cons is they have to come out from their bars and boundaries. It is very essential to make change because it is nature of all god creations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10452961672 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63385135601 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1860717252 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.35 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210766053632 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704763293561 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609464819014 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130547751735 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466556116538 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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