In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?
Smoking affects everyone who smokes and even people around the smoker. In many nations around the world, smoking is prohibited in public area. Some people apparently support that person who is willing to smoke should not be allowed to do so within the same apartment. In my opinion, I completely agree with the view and i will state the reasons for the same.
Smoking is unhealthy activity which is gaining popularity from very young age. At the teenage, they are not aware of consequences of smoking. Youngsters may easily get attracted by public smokers and they may found it trendy. Therefore, if public smoking is illegal then it might be unnoticed among youngsters.
Smoking is having detrimental effects on many organ and key reason for serious diseases such as cancer. Most importantly, Some people are not aware of that smoke comes by smoking is more dangerous to person who is passive smoker. Therefore, publically smoking can harm to group of people. For example, it causes serious effect to every group member waiting at bus stand by person standing next to them.
Lastly, considering all the aspect of smoking and how it can be helpful to others, if person have a separate smoking place. As smoking not only effects the one but also the group among the people. It is much fair to make them move for another place for smoking with a view to save others life.
In conclusion, It is considered that smoking have many harmful effects on others as well. Therefore, it should be considered illegal publically. In my opinion, countries should impose strict laws to prevent smoking in public places. It is also a responsiblity for private organizations to take care safety for non smoking people and consider a rule that does not allow smoking in working area.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n, I completely agree with the view and i will state the reasons for the same. ...
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Line 13, column 42, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organ seems to be countable; consider using: 'many organs'.
Suggestion: many organs
...moking is having detrimental effects on many organ and key reason for serious diseases suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, lastly, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97009966777 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.564951882 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6340751899 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7368421053 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372221616782 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122796445833 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702915192068 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214863568477 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620665624913 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.