Some people thinks that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Unqualified successful professional have raised question on grading system. While some part of demographic society believes that finishing tertiary education secures a qualified job, other modernised people hold a view that getting directly into corporate culture and gaining experience is more helpful. In my opinion, i believe that qualification is integral part of working system.
On one side of the argument, there are some reasons why people consider a notion that working without qualified education and getting practical knowledge is adequate. Firstly, working experience is considered more than enough instead of legal qualification. Because of they might feel that ultimate goal is to get a good working position and it does not require a certification in order to prove their working ability and efficiency. Furthermore, some people believe that working in same field provides essential skills and that can not be achieved by just passing some exams. Therefore, they believe that practical approach is more effective.
Despite the above argument, i am of the view that educational qualification are far more important than actual experience. Indeed, one reason i take this position is that any graduate must have their first class educational qualification before getting into introductory step of selection procedure. Because every esteemed organization would prefer an approved qualified professional instead of an experienced executive. In addition, certain positions require accurate measures to fulfill and it can not be left upon irresponsible education dropout. Therefore, i believe that qualified person is asset to an organization.
In conclusion, though both views are commonly held in the society, i consider that educational certificates has more values than experience notes of few years. Therefore, given this situation, it is recommended that people should finish their university education before getting in to corporate world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... enough instead of legal qualification. Because of they might feel that ultimate goal is to get...
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...ctive. Despite the above argument, i am of the view that educational qualifi...
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...alification are far more important than actual experience. Indeed, one reason i take this positio...
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...n actual experience. Indeed, one reason i take this position is that any graduate...
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...troductory step of selection procedure. Because every esteemed organization would prefe...
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...sponsible education dropout. Therefore, i believe that qualified person is asset ...
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...views are commonly held in the society, i consider that educational certificates ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76975945017 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07756085711 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3958392611 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258475716218 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795301538604 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542250947824 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156374288634 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550957582363 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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