Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the modern world, in order to make their organisation profitable, managers always desire to hire skilled employee so that minimum resources are spent and maximum profits are earned. In the same context, some school of business advocate that tertiary education help pupils to gain the skillset required for the job while many others opine this. They feel that practical knowledge develops the required skills, hence, students should so some sort of work and such experience may help them to crack the interview. Undoubtedly, experience will help to get a job but I feel that with the help of degree, worker can grow in the company.
Admittedly, knowledge in books is limited while scope of practical knowledge is vast. Lessons taught in classrooms can lead to critical situations as the actual conditions may vary, however with the experience, workers know how to deal in such situations and they can tackle the problem easily. Futhermore, by having the work exposure of different fields, people can switch from one organisation to another. For illustration, Elon Musk is college drop out but his exposure to various fields is helping him to make his firm profitable.
Ostensibly, interviews can be cracked with the experience, but for the managerial positions in any organisation, college degrees are required and companies always prefer to hire the candidate who have suitable degree. To substantiate it, In infrastructure, plethora of diploma holders with the experience of 10 years are still working at junior positions as they are unable to apply for the higher positions. Eventheless, tertiary education build stronger character by making them more determining and by imposing strict deadlines for submissions of assignments.
Having dwelled on thoughts, it is clear that graduation is must and internship can help college students to gain experience which can help them to get a desirable job.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, i feel, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28947368421 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90586974026 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.56235931 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101270834426 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386221575981 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361709783956 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639663436133 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274975288094 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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