It is often said “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they visit? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?
The relationship of a vernacular and heritage is often questioned along with motive of reveling of the same. In my opinion, both culture and language go hand in hand, although not impossible, it becomes challenging to understand without language. I, also believe that tourists should be adaptive to the culture of a visiting region and be sensitive to their habits. This essay will discuss the reasons to blend into the lifestyle of a new country and also potential mistakes that could arise by not understanding the native speech.
There is ample evidence that it is more joyous and fulfilling when habits of a touring country are imbibed. The central reason for this is, during any unfamiliar situation in a foreign land it is advisable to follow the lead or acts of regional individuals. In addition to this, changing the style, clothing , food habits will give a completely new perspective of the world. To illustrate this, a report from International tourism board states that over 40% people have experienced a life altering when experienced a new culture during their visits. Therefore it is conclusively clear that it is essential for individuals to follow the norms of the region to have a better experience of the visit and less resistance to the hosts.
Although there is a case of heightened ordeal of the tour by understanding the nativity, the way to enhance is to learn the language. The language is how a culture is shaped and expressed. Knowing the semantics makes one connect with people and region at a deeper level. words and expressions used would give an insight into how the world is perceived by them and helps to not misunderstand it. For example, a word in English could have a completely different meaning in a European language. Using it in a country might not only be out of context but also borderline offensive. Thus it is possible to state that lingo is a route to acquire knowledge of a heritage.
To sum up, in my opinion, despite being able to maneuver one’s way into the habits of natives, I believe that language is the base that is to be understood to have a broader perspective and thus aid in accepting the culture, a crucial task to have a memorable outing and a way to be inclusive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iduals to follow the norms of the region to have a better experience of the visit...
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...ble outing and a way to be inclusive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78497409326 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86707382296 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528497409326 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1931910204 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.647058824 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7058823529 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113882474493 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362184230233 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345545166362 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652552118499 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317829908906 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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