It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30 as this is best for both the individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is generally believed that individuals are advised to knot themselves in a nuptial bond, before reaching adulthood. This is better for the partners as well as for the community. In my opinion, I support the given notion, owing to its long-term benefits for individuals and society.
Firstly, it is encourageable to get married before 30, because it helps to create a sound relationship, which lasts for longer. In other words, if the individuals get married before reaching to complete adulthood, they would become more responsible for their partner as well as their family. With this, they will easily adapt themselves, according to the behavior of their soulmates, which ultimately makes them understandable. According to the Journal of Happy Marriages; about 75% of couples in India, got married in their post-twenties, and their relationships are highly stronger due to this long togetherness.
Secondly, the age before adulthood is considered to be a reproductive age, which is recommended for family planning. To be more precise, in this age, couples are fertile enough as they have fewer issues regarding their reproductive health as compared to matured people. Consequently, raising children before getting busy in other work-life responsibilities, leaves people to lead a stressfree life, instead of getting infertile. For instance, according to an article published in 'The Guardian'; people in the age bracket of 35 to 40 are more likely to face problems of infertility, and even complications in pregnancy.
In conclusion. while I believe that people must get married before reaching adulthood as it makes their relationships fruitful and free from the stress of planning their family. It will not only leads to happy marital relations but also setting a good example for others in society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...cations in pregnancy. In conclusion. while I believe that people must get married ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...planning their family. It will not only leads to happy marital relations but also set...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39649122807 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13214452606 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.135835379 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.307692308 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292396443635 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101285982415 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634391098716 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176958442016 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367303052739 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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