Large establishments are people's choice than small local shops. What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, a lot of big establishments around the city constructed. People prefer to go to this kind of places than going to small shops because there are many choices and prices are cheaper. However, this become a problem to small time shop owners.
In a bigger picture, this is a positive development for the economy of the city. Various job opportunities are available to people
Consumers will get a chance to choose a variety of products. Furthermore, a lot of business minded people can plan to invest on shops that they can rent inside the shopping centres.
However, for local shops, this establishment is an enormous competitor that they cannot compete with because their resources is not enough to persuade consumers to choose them. In addition, local shops has limited products that cannot suffice the needs and wants of people. This become a dilemma to small shop owners because few people visits and buy at their stores. Consequently, in the long run, this will make them decide to close their small business. It will be hard for them to catch up with giant businessmen since they cannot afford to invest in a big amount of money.
In conclusion, although large shopping centres will help the community especially with job opportunities and to consumers to choose different array of items. Local shops should still be visited and people should give them a chance to market their products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95338983051 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67241902969 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2813079078 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9230769231 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208135362828 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745575108244 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050774022285 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109252390406 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656296795164 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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