Police in some countries like in England don’t carry guns. Some do not approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion?
In various countries, laws differ especially in terms of safety and security. there are countries that do not allow their policemen to carry ammunition in public. Whilst, to other places, security forces carry their firearms as mandated by their senior officer if only during working hours.
This issue is becoming a dilemma because of some groups speculates that oftentimes, a person that carries a gun is dangerous. Sometimes, the problem is with the policemen that do not follow the rules. they are not just putting their self in danger but also the people in the surrounding. Furthermore, they feel self-entitled because of what they are carrying that leads people to become afraid of them. On the other hand, since protection of humanity is the utmost priority, it is a must that officers should have something that will keep them safe especially if there is a sudden crime in an area and the police officer needs to respond immediately. Thus, carrying a gun with them during working hours is a must.
In my opinion, as long as the policemen are at work, for instance, field work or when they are in an area for checkpoint and escorting a high official, having a gun with them will make the place secure and people with bad intentions will be afraid to execute their evil plans. However, there should always be limitations and as a responsible person, the use of a gun should only apply to circumstances wherein they need to protect someone or should only be used for self-defense.
To recapitulate, our policemen are our knight in shining armor in this modern era. they must be responsible enough to know when to carry a gun and most essentially when is the right moment to use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77133105802 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68786445211 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5496211184 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249010557568 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08813794679 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574512291872 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138003471065 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796123690274 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.