Leaders of all kinds are often younger than in the past. What are the reasons for this development. Is this a positive or negative development?
In recent times,leaders whether elected or unelected are quite younger than those in the past.Education as well as exposure are some of the major reasons for this development. This development is quite laudable as a result of the fact that it validates the saying that children are the leaders of tomorrow.
Higher education which has become widely sought after especially by the youth has helped most young individuals to discover their abilities and capabilities as a result of the wide range of leadership courses being offered to students. In some universities, for instance students take up leadership roles such as representing their class mates or representing the entire student body by being a member of the student representative body at the state level.such students upon graduation are able to take up bigger leadership roles in the society.
Also,with the advent of social media and internet.youngsters get access to lots of information to add to their wealth of knowledge. Social media allows people to follow the day to day activities of prominent leaders across the globe this acts as an inspiration for the younger generation especially those that look up to these people.
In conclusion,young individuals should not only be encouraged in their quest for leadership they should be supported because they have a lot to give to the society at large.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21719457014 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17237492335 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6362011187 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.714285714 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171918445448 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878476640614 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991858024315 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114730921982 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125628506943 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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