Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better.
Do you agree or disagree?
Senior citizens are holding the topmost positions in the corporations. In contrast, individuals believe that young generation person will be beneficial for company growth.
Nowadays, large numbers of organizations are leading by experience human beings, and they have marvelous enhancement in the business industry. Regards to the statement I strongly consent that elderly people have enough expertise in their domains, owing to this they can provide appropriate leadership to the company to achieve target, as well as maintain the company status on top notch in competitive environment. Furthermore, experience directors, Vice-presidents, Founders are enough capable to raise to funding for organizations, also, they have future vision to expand the employer in contemporary era. Moreover, such kind of personnel have skills specifically to business, marketing, advertising, investment which are playing significant roles in organizational enhancement.
On the hand, some persons recommending that young people should get opportunity to lead the company. Consequently, young blood has different mindset, accordingly they will execute the create the modern atmosphere in workplace. As result, they will involve in Technological aspect in the business and focus on digital marketing. Younger office head can use technology as main stroke to create impact of world as well as their customer. Not only but also, future executives might be use Internet as main path to connect with customers and venders as well as employees. Which may create inevitable impact on business development.
To conclude, in my opinion experience is the core element in business extension, in lack of expertise we might be the reason of operation downing. Although, we should collaborate the modern and ancient thinking together to eggegrate the company production and services.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
... well as maintain the company status on top notch in competitive environment. Furthermore...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... mindset, accordingly they will execute the create the modern atmosphere in workplace. As ...
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Line 5, column 568, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...omers and venders as well as employees. Which may create inevitable impact on busines...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the company production and services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, in contrast, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79636363636 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18207791148 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0149115198 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0644278252876 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208611912089 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280523767658 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364763200161 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145781129849 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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