Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions?
There has been an alarming increase in the volume of crimes committed by the young. The main
contributors to this are high levels of poverty coupled with unhealthy connections. Nevertheless, there is a range of measures that could be implemented to resolve the issue.
Currently, there is a number of families that struggle to make their ends meet. Some parents, unfortunately, fail to sustain their children in decent conditions and as a result leave them devoid of attention. Therefore, they have to spend most of the day outdoors at least to meet the basic human needs. Consequently, some youngsters resort to illegal means. To tackle the problem, governments can launch specifically designated organizations which could care for the youth who are raised in dysfunctional families. Specialists could give them spiritual support and sew clothing out of change.
Another factor conducing to the problem is the environment. Some youngsters tie up with criminals and engage in illegal actions. This might happen due to the unawareness of unfavorable outcomes. So as to settle the problem, authorities could conduct weekly lectures in each community on the topic of crime. In this case, numerous teenagers may think over their life and decide to keep away from unnecessary companies and build their life with clean conscience.
In conclusion, however tempting may be the crime, one must always keep in mind that short-term glory does not deserve long -term prisoning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, as to, at least, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29487179487 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95125927897 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688034188034 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5892961296 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136662177873 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375926508539 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298080794184 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664633835188 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212672923366 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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