Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagre with the statement?
In this modern era, majority of people prefer living in developed countries than the countries they were born. The migrated population will face difficulties in social and practical aspects, irrespective of the financial and social gains they receive. In this essay, I shall discuss on these issues and possible solutions which could make their lives more comfortable.
First and foremost, people migrate to different locations since they cannot enjoy quality life in the countries they were born such as quality education, food, health facilities. For example, in developed countries, the resource distribution is fair among it’s population, so the level of stress is minimized in different aspects. However, migrants face difficulties in recognizingthe accent of the habitants of the specific country. They may find uncomfortable to conversant with a native speaker because of the speed they talk. They might not be able to repond quickly with the inhabitants. Moreover, finding employment will be much difficult, as they cannot market or present themselves in front of their employers.
Therefore, those who expect to migrate need to practice more on the language of the country they intended to settle down. For instance, they have to listen to that specific language on a regular basis in order to get used to the accent, jargons, grammer and vocabulary of that language. Similarly, they can talk with a friend or a relative in the specific country to find more information about thae country before they leave. Speaking in non native language will lose your confidence level, attitude on work and also make adverse impacts on your personality as well.
In conclusion, those who intend to migrate must start learning the language of that country at least two years before the migration, in order to mitigate the issues to a greater extent. Besides, language they have to familiar with the food culture clothing, eating styles and accomodation of the particular country by maintaining a healthy relationship with the indigenous people. In nutshell, migrants must adapt to the culture of the country while forgetting their roots of a particular country; because foreign countries would not accept the customs, rituals and traditions of a foreign country.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35195530726 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84072581697 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564245810056 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2935665854 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149417697129 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501305397062 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347279979946 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989163818015 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445040665446 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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