A lot of old people are suffering from loneliness these days. They also lack physical fitness.
What do you think are the reasons for this problem?
Can you think of possible solutions?
It has been observed that a majority of old people nowadays experiencing desolation and are also physically unfit. While the major reason behind this problem is metamorphic change in family structures, to solve this people need to return back to old joint family living.
It seems people in these days are more inclined towards nuclear families and this perhaps resulting in parents and grandparents left isolated in villages. People, especially youngsters, prefer to live in metro cities owing to better lifestyle and career opportunities by abandoning their elders in villages. This can also be attributed to expensive lifestyle of cities and apathetic attitude of children towards their parents, but as a result of this aged people are forced to live the life of misery and utter desolation.
As far as their physical fitness is concerned, when they realise they are neglected by their own children and grandchildren, they get huge emotional and psychological set-back which results in lack of motivation to exercise. Therefore, in such circumstances the most elderly people adopt sedentary lifestyle and fall prey to weak health.
In order to tackle this predicament people should revert back to old ways of living in joint families. Unlike these days when elders are considered worthless and burden, in the past they were given the command of whole family so that they feel important and honoured. Thus, returning to old ways of living their vitality in family paradigm will increase which is essential to keep them motivated and lively.
So in overall, I would say old people feel secluded and unhealthy mainly because of changing family structures, however this can be addressed through adopting traditional joint living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3152173913 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78437019653 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.6852997624 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.363636364 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183729757125 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724162414118 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397880822092 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104957698708 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331220247858 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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