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Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals
have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Even though a minority considers that guardians should have full authority to take decision regarding immunizations of their offspring, a majority of populace believe that immunization should be legalized without any interference of parents. I cogitate that reckless behavior of parents and financial constraint are two pivotal reasons for persuading the supremacy to make vaccination mandatory without the heed of parents.
Since the hectic life schedule has proffered lethargic behavior in parents regarding the precautions of their children, thus the whole onus for active and health progeny relies on the shoulder of government. Seemingly, if people are liberalized by the authorities and endowed with right to opt for vaccination, then people would tend to forget about the regular immunization. Also it is biased to overlook the facts published by WHO that under the auspices of stringent rules and regulation on the parents about vaccination
in the formative ages of children has brought the deadly pandemic named 'Polio' under absolute control in India. Therefore, granting liberty about the immunization would lead to hefty loss in term of healthy citizenry in future.
On the top of that, financial limitation among parents would intensify the severity of some general diseases by turning it into chronic epidemic.Lack of money compels the people to postpone the vaccination, but if government emphasis on making vaccination legal then it would arrange some legitimate resources and provide the free vaccination to children. To exemplify, as per the report published in gone calendar year by British Medical Association, paucity of sufficient fund in hands of commoners in Pakistan has made the Polio a severe ailment. Hence, while making any vaccination mandatory for public , the authority would definitely arrange some amenities to endow treatment at
free of charge.
In conclusion, although the democracy verdict freedom to denizens, making immunisation mandatory is the only impeccable strategy to put the rein on burgeoning the chronic pandemic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6050955414 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00183197613 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608280254777 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2962673878 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.0 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162257752665 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518325073392 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403403403016 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731228110737 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360767853952 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.