in many cities the pollution is increasing.some says that the urbanisation process denies us knowing our neighbours and this causes a loss of community sense. what is the main problem with this what measure can be taken
It is irrefutable that nowadays, people are increasing day to day life in this modern generation.they are not getting a chance to spend time with their family members and they don't even talk with their neighbours. In this essay, we will discuss that what are the problems in this generation people are getting in to it and how we can avoid this situation in future.
Firstly, all the persons are moving to urban cities in order to get good jobs. They are getting affect in to the city life and they forcely put in to do the modern culture in that case they are enjoy their life in the urban cities.Even though some of them are coming to cities due to family problem and loan problem due to that their main focus to earn money and they are not spending times with neighbours. For intances, In one of the biggest city in India,that affected in to natural disasster so that moment only people knows whoever staying next to them and they helped everyone.
In addition to this,there are pleathora of apartment in all the cities and childrens are not getting a plan that where where they can play because of that entire family members are always there in their apatment and even they will not go outside.in this scenario,children will face lot of problems like obesity.For example, my colleque who is staying in city and both are working in IT.they generally comes at 8pm in the evening and his children comes from school at 4pm after that he plays only computer games with out spend time with their friends.Finally,he faced lot of health issues.
To summarize this,government has to responsible to create awareness about the city life cluture and hoe to invest time with their family members and neighbours.people also has to understand that money only not enough for our life our need always good friends,good health and good circumstance so that we can grow up with out any issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...time with their family members and they dont even talk with their neighbours. In thi...
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Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... it and how we can avoid this situation in future. Firstly, all the persons are moving...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
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Suggestion: effect
...rder to get good jobs. They are getting affect in to the city life and they forcely put i...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...he modern culture in that case they are enjoy their life in the urban cities.Even tho...
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Suggestion: Even
...re enjoy their life in the urban cities.Even though some of them are coming to citie...
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...e coming to cities due to family problem and loan problem due to that their main ...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...lem and loan problem due to that their main focus to earn money and they are not spending...
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Suggestion: come
...d both are working in IT.they generally comes at 8pm in the evening and his children ...
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... with out spend time with their friends.Finally,he faced lot of health issues. To su...
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...ut spend time with their friends.Finally,he faced lot of health issues. To summa...
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...or our life our need always good friends,good health and good circumstance so that we...
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...ood circumstance so that we can grow up with out any issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, so, as to, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70645930077 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.137532377 49.4020404114 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.857142857 106.682146367 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.1428571429 20.7667163134 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167734122287 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892438684907 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579544203108 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114711212688 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385550766778 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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