Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is a good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Time is changing and so are advertisement developed and reformed. In these competitive market, sponsorship is a great marketing tool that companies can benefit from its vast impacts. While there are disadvantages to publicize by sponsoring sports, I personally believe that this marketing trend has tremendous effect on product promotion.
On the one hand, many commentators justifiably are arguing that companies can benefit from advertising their products due to sport sponsorship which is considered as a lucrative industry these days. Owing to this, companies sales would be increase and their brand position is more likely to improve among other competitors. In addition, it is more beneficial that a company sponsor the team or athletes. Since offering them a monetary resource provides a tranquility atmosphere and the amenity for them to improves their ability and performances in order to gain popularity. Moreover, there is no doubt, if a company becomes a brand ambassador of leading sports’ team, it can gain a huge profit by investing in champions and events.
On the other hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that publicity of the products by sponsorship has several drawbacks. They argue that sport events are deceptive way to marketing commercial goods. Which means that by this method of advertising and commercialization of athletics and sports’ activities, they are more likely to put into corruption trap. Furthermore, it would result in impulsive buying, as people are encouraged to purchase the products that they use them infrequent. For example, this situation would be compounded by the fact that a team is sponsored by the company that produces the goods that affects directly on children healthcare. Hence, children are encouraged simply and the products endorsed by their favorable sports’ team, the impact are inevitable.
To sum up, funding sport events and teams can be advantages for both team and the company sponsoring them. In my personal opinion, although this sponsorship might have some drawbacks, the merits are more prominent. Since the company sales will be increases and the team monetary resource will be enhanced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, no doubt, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44152046784 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04766461991 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540935672515 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3834823164 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.470588235 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167546137646 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547372169146 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272227440935 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10010401807 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192866219687 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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