Many countries aim to improve their living standards by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result.
Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages
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The developed nations focuses on their economic policies in order to provide their citizens a better living. However, in the process it is thought that the social values are lost. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of economic development.
Many nations today are thriving due to their ecocnomy. In such countries, medicine and education are provided are free as that is the priority for everyone. Despite of worrying about their future citizens of such nations can be relaxed. To exemplify, many European nations provide free education and health care for all their citizens, as a result, many aim to go to European countries to settle there, as they believe that their future generations can get a better life. Thus, the positives of economic development are significant and crucial for any nation to prosper.
On the other hand, when economic development is attained, it is perceived that social values are overlooked. In rich countries, each and every individual is given utmost importance, as a matter of fact, they are pampered which makes few take things for granted. When there is no necessity to work for their future, people often become self-centered and lose purpose in life. According to a survey conducted by Ministry of Educational Departement in USA, out of all the graduates from top schools only 38% are native Americans. Thus, the drawbacks are clearly evident which should not be overlooked in order to secure their position among developed nations.
To conclude, although people become lazy when a government fulfills all their needs, I believe merits of economic development definetly outweighs the demerits. Therefore, health and education help many succeed in their life than making them lose their purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29893238434 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72385902305 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5241950592 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245802309667 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855268806989 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616937041111 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164197571307 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057390478421 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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