Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
It is rightly said that a persons personality is reflected by how well he keeps his surrounding and belongings. This often makes people think that keeping things clean, well organised and in proper place is very crucial. I completely concur with the above statement as it helps to make our lives disciplined, healthy and foster us with time management skill.
To embark upon, well organised office and home is a symbol of status and discipline. It creates a good impression on visitors. For example, a departmental store which is divided orderly into different sections as well as a properly organised shop is always preferred by a customer than a chaotic, messy general store. This is one of the strategy used to attract customers and built up the business.
Moreover, whenever a person enters a clean, properly furnished room, a hormone called serotonin is secreted in the body, which enables us to feel euphoric, relaxed and positive. For instance, a dark, dull, dusty room makes us feel low and depressed, while a well lighted clean room makes us cheerful. Hence it creates a major impact on our mental health.
Furthermore, if things are rightly places, then it will not only save our time to find them whenever needed, but also reduces the probability of getting it misplaced. This can be well illustrated in office work, by keeping important documents of different projects sorted out and filed up. This helps us to work with an ease and gives us an opportunity to impress the superior authorities.
To recapitulate, well organised home, office creates a good impression in the society, brings a positive ambience and mental health, and ease our life by saving time. Therefore, it is important for everyone to master this essential skill.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
It is rightly said that a persons personality is reflected by how well he...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...l lighted clean room makes us cheerful. Hence it creates a major impact on our mental...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99315068493 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78305632615 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9816123195 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100639419553 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367796083602 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039634364672 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059680351846 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408944347033 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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