In many countries insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reason for this? What problems might this cause in society?
Nowadays, it is witnessed that enough respect is not given to the elderly people in most of the places around the world. In my opinion, the current generation should take into account to hold up the dignity, which the senior citizens yearn and protect the humanity.
The main reason for not respecting the older people, is that people consider them an overburdened soul, because majority of them are financially dependent, although, most of it was invested in the well-being the younger ones. Moreover, the old aged men suffer from health disorders. Hence, they demand a caretaker solely dedicating time for them, which is tedious. Furthermore, with their experiences of life, they try to give uninvited advises, which is felt inappropriate and earns hatred. For example, research shows increased old age homes in most of the developing countries, as a result of intolerance towards the old.
The Society is facing umpteen issues due to the disrespect shown on elderly. However, this promotes a live alone or small family system with deteriorating extended family, which indirectly result in alienation, depression, isolation and feeling of loneliness among any age group leading to Physical and mental trauma. Consequently, the implications are registered in the minds of the next generation and imitative behavior can be seen from them. To illustrate, a child visualizes his grandparents tormented every day in front of him, learns how the world operates and applies the same one day on his parents.
In conclusion, displaying gratitude on the souls, who sacrificed all their lives for the betterment of their young one’s lives, is the best way to prove humanity’s existence. While, by respecting the old, let us teach our future generation tolerant behavior towards the older ones.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34965034965 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93150489755 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671328671329 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7327750278 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111224594777 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335192441216 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354305319911 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054811206317 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247004431231 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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