In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Smoking has being a tradition over generation of time but nowadays, most countries forbid by law smoking in public arenas. Those with the ego to smoke have the obligation to step out and satisfy their desire. In my opinion, I strongly agree that people should step out when they want to smoke so as to protect their health, those of non smokers and the environment.
Advancement in medical research has shown us that smoking is detrimental to the health of both the smoker and those around them. In order words, anyone inhaling tobacco smoke is prone to health issues including cancer, hypertension, and other heart related diseases. In addition, research has shown that secondary smokers have higher risk of heart failure than the main smoker. It would be unfair for someone with breathing problems to inhale toxic air from tobacco. For this reasons, it is be polite for smokers to stay away from non smokers when they desire to smoke.
Smoking is not only dangerous to people but to the environment as a whole. That is to say carbon dioxide release during smoking is a green house gas which directly impacts our climate. A lot of scientific researches have shown that the primary cause of global warming is carbon dioxide released from industries and burning tobacco. Furthermore, smoking can result to disaster some cases. For instance, gas leak in an enclosed environment can lead to explosion if someone lit a cigarette.
In conclusion, states that are environmentally conscious are banning smoking on public gathering. It is absolutely correct for people with the desire to smoke to step out and enjoy themselves without affecting the health of others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...should step out when they want to smoke so as to protect their health, those of non smok...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'inhales'.
Suggestion: inhales
...ose around them. In order words, anyone inhaling tobacco smoke is prone to health issues...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s to inhale toxic air from tobacco. For this reasons, it is be polite for smokers to...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...r from tobacco. For this reasons, it is be polite for smokers to stay away from no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02888086643 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65451732415 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9785099663 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208022449253 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759606958397 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393407152662 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13093640877 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223990496438 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.