In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
In the contemporary society,it is true that the level of crime has increased in innumerable countries and are becoming violent day by day. In this essay, I shall examine the problems and also provide suitable solution for the aforementioned problem.
To begin with, the increasing number of crimes are seen more in developing countries. One of the main factors, for increasing number of crimes is unemployment. People get along towards the negative side of the life and ends up harming other individuals. For example, in America a man shot down several students in mass firing because he was frustrated and unemployed. Moreover, many people get into robbery, drugs peddling and other unethical things which is not acceptable in a good society. If these things are not controlled, then it can have a detrimental effect on individuals and can cause disturbance in the society.
Accordingly, the problems to the aforementioned issues should also be varied. Firstly, government should infuse more funds towards employment opportunities. This will help to ameliorate a better society and also create awareness among-st individuals to be positive in life. On the other side, the government policies such as taxation should be more liberal and in the favor of the common man. Moreover, government should invest in strict action towards drugs consuming and peddling as this is most common crime found in day to day life.
To conclude, the crime level has increased in most of the countries due to unemployment. However, it can be controlled by creating awareness and investing in more employment opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
In the contemporary society,it is true that the level of crime has inc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in fact, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27237354086 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04627763274 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556420233463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0564931231 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268278518609 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886431311502 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778227728235 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177792351233 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597073826579 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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