In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it ?
Crime situation is alarming nowadays in many countries and more & more crime particular violent in nature are perpetrated. There are various reasons behind severe crimes which are dependent on local environment. In order to deal with these aggressive crimes, steps can be taken which I shall explain in below essay.
Many people believe that most of the crimes reasons are related to environment where person lives. First and foremost, society as a whole does not punish the person who commits the physical abuses with other people and many of such crimes go unrecognized and victim suffers invariably. For instance, in many Islamic countries, physical abuses are allowed with women and even law and enforcement agencies do not register the crime against committers. Secondly, in many places, people do suffer from hunger and live life extreme poverty. These people neither have good education nor has knowledge about rules, resulting, become a tool for gangs and criminal who use them to carry out the serious attack.
A lot more can be done for reducing the crimes especially physical in nature. To begin with, government can create awareness about the serious crimes and its repercussion. By doing so, people would hesitate to commit such kind of crimes. For instance, in Europe, inflicting physical injuries on someone cause major punishment such as life imprisonment and confiscation of money and properties. Furthermore, government may generate the employee opportunities for young people who are most vulnerable if suffer from long term unemployment.
To sum-up, though crimes are done with many intentions, social conditions and poverty cause people to become criminals. Proper education, awareness and employment for youth may reduce the violent crime up-to some extent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'causes'.
Suggestion: causes
...inflicting physical injuries on someone cause major punishment such as life imprisonm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39426523297 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72907390661 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5131274633 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298114725407 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106482985337 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858861496899 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192305129077 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438666232506 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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