In many countries, shops are open long hours every day of the week. Discuss the positive or negative effect on the shopper and the local community.
Shopping malls stay open till late night in many places around the globe. This essay with discuss the pros and cons of this emerging trend on customers and society as a whole.
Coming towards the benefits, firstly, it could be considered as convenient as people can visit and purchase items according to their ease at whichever time suits feasible tom them. This helps in maintaining the hectic work schedule everyone has to keep up with in today's era. For instance, shopping centers in Beijing are open for customers 24/7 which allow them to buy goods at night as most of the people gets free at night. Secondly, it offers more business opportunities as instead of going to open specific large malls, people can buy necessities at their local centers. Additionally, as the work continues for more than one shift, it creates part-time jobs for more people such as students who have to attend classes during day time.
Although this pattern has advantages, while on closer inspections we can find some drawbacks. First of all, it puts a burden on government as the services such as security and traffic regulation need to be working till required. These not only generates administrative issues but also the financial overload is transferred to local tax payers. For example, government taxation in Dubai is ten times more than in Saudi Arabia. Furthermore, disturbance generated in the busy parts deprives the society of comfort as children, for example, because of noises, cannot get enough relaxed sleep which leads to anxiety and other social problems.
In conclusion, while convenience and business opportunities are the plus points to this phenomenon, it also holds negative aspects such as over-burdened government departments, and reduction in quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17708333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78029183107 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.069440177 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796549490086 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281521371705 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035875890962 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522486752626 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376450228995 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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