In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are being popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
Nowadays, as a result of crime’s effect on people’s life, it is clear that their style of reading books and watching movies has been changed around the world. Most people might interest in the crime which is the main topic.
There are a wide range of reasons which need to be taken into consideration. Firstly, the number of people who commit a crime in the world is increasing. It might have direct or indirect effect on people’s way of thinking. Therefore, people are willing to read crime stories and watch crime series. Secondly, since the demand for these kind of movies and books is growing, a vast number of writers and directors are more likely to create books and films that cover the crime topic. Thirdly, most people believe that crime novels are full of valuable life lessons that they can learn from victim’s mistakes. Thus they take full advantage of these movies. Also, it can provide a unique learning experience.
From my point of view, crime dramas and fictions are interesting and amazing. One’s can imagine themselves instead of characters and gain more experience. In addition, these type of books and films broaden people’s horizons. However, the widespread use of crime books, might encourage aggressive behavior in societies. It can be a threat to children. Consequently, the juvenile delinquency is encouraged from an early age.
In conclusion, reducing crime rate in the world plays a vital role in every country. Books, films and documents can help to achieve these goals. Also, world need peace more than crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... they can learn from victim’s mistakes. Thus they take full advantage of these movie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03488372093 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5827364582 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.410058345 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3684210526 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5789473684 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251108190649 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778025039508 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640837758626 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15944312773 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242889460291 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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