A museum near your home is looking for people to do voluntary work. You would like to do some voluntary work at museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary work. In your letter
Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum
Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful
Give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to do voluntary work at your museum because of various reasons. Firstly, the museum is within walking distance of my home. Thus, I am able to arrive museum very soon. Secondly, I am really keen on heritage sites and everything that is belonged to history. Therefore, I would have a sense of achievement, if I am employed in the museum as a volunteer.
I would like to write that, my previous experience was voluntary work and I am familiar with unpaid labor. Also, I have excellent interpersonal skills that it would be useful at workplace. In addition, I am a good team player. Meanwhile, I am good at time management. Consequently, I can set priority base on tasks which are assigned.
Since I am a student and I have sufficient time in summer, I would be available for work from next month.
I am looking forward your answer.
Yours sincerely,
Bahare past
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71974522293 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91555595905 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5871936673 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0769230769 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 4.34317383033 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297464961431 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942659024344 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110021324775 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160477012083 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085031255116 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.