Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as Sahara desert and the Artatic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?
These days as a result of advancement in transport and technology, tourists are be able to travel places where there are not convenient. New forms of transport and widespread use of the Internet provide tourists with several destinations that they do not expect to visit.
Visiting impassable places have numerous advantages for tourists. Firstly, they can gain more experience. Sharing these experience leads to discovering endangered species of animals that nobody knows about them until now. For instance, the photos that had taken from tropical forests showed that special species of pandas were living there. Secondly, since most people find it difficult to visit these places, there are not any hotel,shops and accommodation. Thus, traveling to these kind of places might create carrer opportunities. For example, luxury hotels are built in some deserts in order to employ young workforce. Thirdly, tourists who visit impassable places benefit from pleasant atmosphere and feel reborn because they spend some quality time with their friends or family members.
Visiting such places has several disadvantages. From an environmental point of view, tourists who visit untouched forest more likely to damage the environment and wildlife habitats by cutting down trees and dropping litter in the lakes and rivers. Therefore, they might cause irreparable damage to the environment. Another negative effect is that most tourists are not familiar with desert’s weather and roads. Consequently, they are more likely to run into a problem. For example, news reported that a group of young people had lost their ways in desert and they compelled to spend one week without any food and drink.
In conclusion, although tourists enjoy traveling untouched places, they should be aware of consequences. Also, such places should be preserved for people who will live in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43150684932 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74380689225 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3011324017 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347140418691 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101686972285 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778282890904 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200708142352 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368815569481 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.