Many working people get little or no either exercise during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Most people have a tight schedule around the world and they do not have sufficient time for exercising. As a result of working too much, they are more likely to suffer from health problems.
There are wide range of factors which can be taken into consideration. Firstly, nowadays most people who work more and more have a sedentary lifestyle. Thus, they are unwilling to have any activities. For example, most employees are stuck behind the desk the whole day and after work they would rather to spend some quality time with their family member. Secondly, workaholic people do not spend their time on exercising because they are get used to work all the moments without wasting time. In addition, if they had free time, they would catch up on more work. Thirdly, for these people working is the highest priority in their life. Consequently, exercising does not matter for them.
Big companies should raise public awareness about the negative consequences of working too much. Also, they can launch campaign to encourage exercising behavior in the society. Another thing that can be effective is that employees should be encouraged to exercise on a regular basis at workplace. For instance, there are several light exercise that employees can do it behind the desk in a short time.
In conclusion, although working plays a vital role in people’s life, it is clear that we should know the importance of exercising. By exercising and boosting physical stamina, we can work efficiently for a long time. Also, the balance of work and exercise improve the quality of work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, another thing, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98479087452 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60699007094 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566539923954 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1968619445 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1176470588 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.70588235294 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371524359616 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125051472722 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621810123418 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231356767217 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505838514862 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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