Thera have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager have asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter, in your letter
Describe the complaints that have been made
Say why the reception area is important
Suggest how the reception could be improved
I am writing a letter base on numerous complaints that have received about the reception area. The most problem that it considered in several complaints is that the atmosphere of the reception area is unpleasant. Another issues is that there are not sufficient seats for visitors. Also, visitors complained that they were not welcomed warmly.
Since reception area is the first place that visitors might see, it is important that our company hold happy memories for them in order to they can spend some quality time with us and we develop company reputation. In addition, the vast number of people might visit these place. Consequently, it should be specious and well-equipped.
I would like to mention that the reception area could be improved by purchasing standard air conditioning and comfortable seat. Moreover, our company should recruit expert staffs who have excellent interpersonal skills and the reception should be decorated tastefully. I hope you find it useful.
Yours sincerely,
Bahare Past
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...tion area is unpleasant. Another issues is that there are not sufficient seats for...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.325 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86462802995 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2589184709 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4545454545 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331540288504 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101308667782 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10180234496 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190683635548 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086762185623 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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