In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion?
Children are raised in different ways around the world. Some people believe that laws which it is enforced by government can help their children from an early age. However, some people argued that it is up to them how to treat their children.
On the one hand, laws can facilitate individuals’ life. Firstly, since teenagers are willing to be independent, adults need to monitor them. Therefore, parents can benefit from restriction. Secondly, people who are raised by laws, they are more likely to succeed in their life and career. Moreover, following rules bring about carful and law-oriented person. Thirdly, government people with calm and well-being at night. Thus, it might decrease the crime rate in some neighborhood where is located in the suburbs.
On the other hand, curfew might have negative consequences. Firstly, teenagers who are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night, might become aggressive and they do not follow laws. Consequently, these laws encourage aggressive behavior in societies. Secondly, these kind of rules, might effect on parents treatment. They might limit their children more and more. Thus, it can cause mind disorder and health problems. For instance, parents who force their children to work and give their income.
In conclusion, from my point of view laws should help people to live easily regardless of time, place and age. Limitation can lead to problems. People might face difficulties that limitation cause them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...essive behavior in societies. Secondly, these kind of rules, might effect on parents treat...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...s. Secondly, these kind of rules, might effect on parents treatment. They might limit ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23012552301 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69336494689 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602510460251 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8833440652 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.5 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.95 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.45 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163543479636 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433454590808 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792707755506 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894012243063 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527448726996 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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