You recently organized on all-day meeting for your company which took place in a hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
Say what the participants liked about the hotel
Explain why they were unhappy about the food
Suggest what the manger should do to improve the food in the future
Dear Sir/Madam,
Our company had a meeting in your hotel last week. I am writing a letter to inform you and your team about the participants’ feedback. They enjoyed the pleasant atmosphere that the meeting was held. Also, they said your team treated audiences with respect and dignity. Therefore, they spent some quality of time with each other.
I would like to mention that they were unhappy about launch because the quality of food was low and it was not fresh. Also, it smelled awful and it was salty. Since the participants are very important for our company, we had organized the meeting in your hotel which it has good reputation.
I suggest that you recruit a chief who is expert and familiar with hotel’s rules. If the food before serving was tasted, it would not happen such as problem. I hope you find it useful and we will have another meeting in your hotel.
Yours sincerely,
Bahare past
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74213836478 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42021535158 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2369999572 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8333333333 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443225049749 0.216113520407 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13364599954 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709466564851 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283419628114 0.12726935374 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636072406983 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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