Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep? What can be done about lack of sleep?
By passing time and advancement in technology everything has been facilitated. However, humans in modern societies struggle with problems which it seems solve easy, but incredibly most people suffer from sleep deprivation.
There are wide range of reasons which is taken into consideration. Firstly, nowadays people’s lifestyle has been changed around the world. overcrowding the fast pace of life leads to sleep deprivation. Secondly, since most people have a tight schedule and they do not have sufficient time for relaxing, they are more likely to deal with stress. Consequently, these kind of painful emotions result in facing lack of sleep. Thirdly, as a result of widespread use of the Internet, people spend a sizable amount of time on PCs, laptop and cellphones. The signals which are sent from electronic devices might have an adverse effect on sleep.
The best way to catch up on sleep is that people take a nap during a day. It helps them to boost physical stamina for a couple of moments. Therefore, they are more likely to sleep easily at night. Another thing that is essential is that avoid staying up through the night. One’s who are sleep deprived should manage their time in order to go to bed early. In addition, people’s like them should not drink coffee and tea before sleeping because this type of drinks have caffeine that have a negative effect on sleep.
In conclusion, since sufficient sleep plays a vital role in our life, we should raise public awareness about sleeping and the consequence of sleep deprivation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Overcrowding
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, another thing, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03112840467 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66553153532 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.63157834 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30781190636 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090232790551 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672868041704 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182609366889 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491627583375 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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