You work for international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are a way
Ask for his/her in arrange it
Dear…,
I would like to spend six months working in head office in Turkey. Since our team members need to be familiar with programming software, I would like to apply for a programming course which it will start next month. These course will teach by expert developer who has strong credential and it lasts for six months. Consequently, I decide to work in head office during the course time. In addition, I can share my experience and knowledge with other colleagues to boost company’s advancement in programming.
While I am here, my work could be done off line by my own self and we could have weekly meeting by skype. Moreover, I have informed my team member to help me, if I would not have access to e-mails.
If you send an email and arrange with human manger in Turkey, I will appreciate. I hope, I will take full advantages of these course and be useful for our company.
Yours sincerely,
Bahare past
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...uld not have access to e-mails. If you send an email and arrange with human manger in Turkey...
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Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... company. Yours sincerely, Bahare past
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65030674847 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63039269158 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4382982442 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270438454947 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107983585638 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114838071602 0.0603063233224 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135210651888 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107418301282 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.