More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?
It is clear that people’s lifestyle have changed by passing time. Nowadays, people are willing to have a sensible eating plan. Also, they benefit from exercising on a regular basis.
There are a lot of reasons which can be taken into consideration. Firstly, most famous people like actors and singers believe that being on shape play a vital role in their life. Therefore, they are more likely to eat healthy food and exercise to interest their fans. Also, they encourage eating healthy food behavior in society. Secondly, since the number of death because of having poor eating habitats and having sedentary lifestyle is increasing in the world, people try to have proper nutrition. Consequently, they eat food that has high nutrition value. In addition, they have more activities during the day to boost their physical stamina. Thirdly, most people realize the positive effects of doing exercise in their life. For example, they suffer from health problem like sleep deprivation and stress and after starting healthy diet and exercise, they feel better.
From an educational perspective, schools should encourage students to have more activity and limit fat intake. For instance, they can launch campaign which it is advertised eating balanced diet. Meanwhile, governments should raise public awareness about the consequence of indulging fatty and salty food. Another thing that it is decisive factor in motivate people to do exercise is that learn from athlete’s life and search about exercise’s positive effects on health and well-being.
In conclusion, although eating healthy food and exercising is tiring, we should treat our body with respect and benefit from long term effects on our life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, another thing, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59422171037 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9689325719 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7058823529 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290775562217 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934922361547 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476161948558 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169496257558 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451195243415 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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